2019专四作文开头写作技巧：“两要两不要”

2019-01-25 16:39:04来源：网络

2019专四作文开头写作技巧：“两要两不要”

　　开头

　　好的开始是成功的一半。匆匆下笔，简单地套用一些万能的模板，想要一劳永逸、以不变应万变，这只会给人一种不好的印象。即便后面写得很出彩，也很有可能受到这个第一印象的影响，而没有得到理想的分数。

　　因此，掌握开头段的写作方法，力争让阅卷老师眼前一亮，还是很有必要的。

　　开头部分的任务是点明主题，提供与主题有关的必要信息。入题要快，一般遵循“两要两不要”原则。

　　两要

　　要开门见山，直击主题;

　　要高度归纳，简洁有力。

　　两不要

　　不要照抄题干中给出的单词或表达方式;

　　不要长长的前奏，不然你就欠揍了。

　　下面咱们来看个例子，感受一下!例如论题：

　　Will tourism bring harm to the environment?

　　例文：With the quick development of social economy nowadays, people’s life has changed greatly. More and more people have money and time to travel around. Therefore, the problem of tourism has been brought into focus. Some people think that we should try our best to promote tourism, and others believe that too many visitors will bring harm to the environment. Every coin has two sides. Weighing up these two opinions, I think tourism is bad to environment.

　　感觉如何?有同学可能说：写得不错啊……

　　口下留情，且慢赞美!请各位跟我一起来分析分析，再发表自己的卓见。

　　这段话共6句：

　　第一句“With the quick development of social economy nowadays, people’s life has changed greatly”是万能的废话;

　　第二句“More and more people have money and time to travel around.” 嗯，提到论题travel了，好开心;

　　第三句“Therefore, the problem of tourism has been brought into focus.” 因为有钱、有时间旅游了，人们就关注旅游问题了?有钱、有时间能干的事情很多，并不能成立明显的因果关系。

　　第四句“Some people think that we should try our best to promote tourism, and others believe that too many visitors will bring harm to the environment. ” 这句中promote这个词用得还是可以点赞的哦;

　　第五句“Every coin has two sides.” 哇哦!我只有三个字来评价这句，那就是“烂-大-街”!

　　最后一句“Weighing up these two opinions, I think tourism is bad to environment.” 这句马马虎虎了，bad这个常见词汇还是挺败笔的。

　　通读这个开头段，你会发现整篇文章的核心词是travel、tourism、tourism、tourism，重复单调，显得词汇匮乏。

　　还记得我们的原则么?

　　两要：要开门见山，要高度概括;

　　两不要：不要照抄，不要啰嗦。

　　下面咱们再来看一段例文：

　　Nowadays, tourism has become a very big and booming business in China. Some people insist that we should spare no effort to promote it with its great contribution to economic growth. However, others argue that too many visitors will bring harm to the environment. I side with the latter.

　　这一段开头点题：“tourism has become a very big and booming business. ”

　　然后介绍了两种不同的观点及其主要理由：“…promote tourism with its great contribution to economic growth, too many visitors will bring harm to the environment. ”而且这两种观点的表达方式还有变化。

　　最后自己观点的陈述也很简洁：“I side with the latter.”

　　这一段，看着就舒服多了。

　　明确了开头段落的写作原则，那再看看开头段落的内容。

　　一般说来，开头包括导语和主题。如果一上来就点题，显得有些唐突，因此就需要有那么一两句导语来暖场。

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